klosterfobik
replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik
8 Sep 2004, 3:10 PM
I know its an adverb but I just thought I'd try it as a noun,like daybreak,red-letter day,bygone or past...
seems more dramatic this way?Or not?
This poem is one of the longer ones I've read. But, as long as it was for me, I kept reading. That's good. Typos I could have done without, but otherwise, lovely.
Yea.
Um. Well the words "letting go issues" comes to mind, but who am I to judge. It's a 5 for me, Bob.
Ah, I couldn't help it. It actually made me smirk a little.
Hmm. We've all felt like that at one point or another.
I won't vote on this because poems that I like I tend to hand out 8's to. But whether or not the world's 8 is the same is mine, well I don't know. But I will say that I like this. Reminds me of the stuff you'd find in Cobain's journal.
Do you mean for "was" to be a noun?
You are - though they did actually make the mistake once of publishing a poem called "The Silent Scream" in an anthology entitled "Mind Mutations".
I could always just self publish like yourself - Or am I mistaken?
Delicate was refers to a fleeting - fragile memory left behind by a girl in the form of a sweet odor,its delicate because if you tamper with it it will go away.Do you not even appriciate the
the scents of the women you've had?Like their perfume,lotion or shampoo?Sorry if its "cutesy".And as for affection your correct,as for Ben Harper-ish your very wrong.
A roaring flea.
Lol
Do you distinguish between "A more descriptive title might have eased my misunderstanding" and "Maybe a more descriptive title might have eased my misunderstanding or failure to know what you mean"?
That's the ultimate in dimness, a colossal blob of balogne blubber! I'm learning. Ain't it great.
As far as I can see, the BBC source doesn't say anything about prositutes. Why don't you have a look at it?
Zodiac brought up the thing about yellow cards from some other source. A google search will reveal a number of sites quoting the yellow card thing. For example:
http://goasia.about.com/cs/singapore/l/a apic032301a.htm
Oh, and for the love of Christ, learn how to reply to comments properly.