Dovina
on Middle of the Night by Sasha
23 Sep 2004, 4:54 PM
I like this. It's unusual and right and nicely done.
Too vague, but I like the first and last lines.
Grammer has never been my strongest point - even though I'm an editor by trade! Interesting point about the Morrissey song. I am a fan but not about that one.
The Nuding Hose By The Parson's Nose
ha ha ha, awesome.
Whatever tour bus you were on took the short route, try New York, more snowflakes -- less earthquakes.
yes!
this is just so good
I realy love this poem 10/10
Being preceded by lines all ending in commas the line break 'the skies above/ me dance' gives me a headache.
The poem has nice sounds. Not sure what 'pressing into me your ice cold' is all about. Perhaps something to do with the morrissey song 'Phallus in a freezer'.
Utter nonsense.
Another swell read.
A jewel, a real gem.
A lit queef -=8=-
A grammaric nightmare, but there's some salvagable stuff in there, somewhere.
A quartered pine nut.
Helo, here's another welsh poet!
Helo, dyma bardd arall cymreig!