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Middle of the Night (Sonnet) by Sasha
The zany bee that haunts my bedroom’s so hyper he can’t do much but skim the wall and zoom the room, though he and I both know that neither wants him buzzing here at all. He’d rather be outside and free to fly, and I in simple sleep where dreams are sane. I can’t free him- more might fly in. That’s why I swat in vain at where he bangs the pane. I know now when by day I climb his trees, or kneel down near his flowers for a smell, why he feels the strong need to come release deep in my arm his little piece of hell. It is a kind of tit-for-tat attack: The stinging is his way of swatting back.

Up the ladder: Ode
Down the ladder: Finding Gin and Santa

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.125
Weighted score: 5.8404417
Overall Rank: 1603
Posted: September 23, 2004 3:30 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2004 3:34 PM PDT
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[10] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 23-Sep-04/4:54 PM | Reply
I like this. It's unusual and right and nicely done.
[9] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 24-Sep-04/4:48 AM | Reply
Fiss plaps
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