| Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
jessicazee 24.160.246.91 |
11-Sep-07/1:35 AM |
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i want you to kiss my mouth; it is pretty
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| Re: Harmony by MacFrantic |
INTRANSIT 65.29.52.204 |
10-Sep-07/7:21 PM |
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I'd drop the first two lines. And both -is- in s-4.
Love the sport of spring.
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| Re: My No-Good Graces by D. $ Fontera |
INTRANSIT 65.29.52.204 |
10-Sep-07/7:17 PM |
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| Re: Eye's Upon Tomorrow's Night by Enkidu |
INTRANSIT 65.29.52.204 |
10-Sep-07/7:15 PM |
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S-2 is where it begins to roll.
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| Re: Come Now by Joi |
SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.102 |
10-Sep-07/2:29 PM |
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Soon to be parodied. And trust me, it will be VULGAR and fantastically TASTELESS.
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| Re: Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.102 |
10-Sep-07/2:10 PM |
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| Re: My No-Good Graces by D. $ Fontera |
some deleted user 63.127.193.79 |
10-Sep-07/3:58 AM |
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I like the rhythm and rhyme scheme of this. nicely done.
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| Re: Eye's Upon Tomorrow's Night by Enkidu |
some deleted user 63.127.193.79 |
10-Sep-07/3:54 AM |
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Some decent lines here--good work.
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| Re: If David Biespiel Wrote A Haiku by Aetius |
pete 62.56.88.175 |
9-Sep-07/6:02 PM |
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| Re: a comment on manifesto by malpaso |
xxx 67.172.190.253 |
9-Sep-07/3:33 PM |
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I vote on all your posts!!
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| Re: a comment on manifesto by malpaso |
xxx 67.172.190.253 |
9-Sep-07/6:56 AM |
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| Re: manifesto by malpaso |
malpaso 68.240.124.35 |
8-Sep-07/5:11 PM |
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| Re: a comment on floored by godspeed |
godspeed 81.151.114.183 |
7-Sep-07/11:27 AM |
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
hobojo 71.198.25.165 |
5-Sep-07/5:19 PM |
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In all of my artistic endeavors, art, music, cooking, and writing, I do so for myself. It is an outlet, it cleanses my emotions, it teaches me something new, and it results in a creation. If someone else enjoys and benefits, wonderful. Ignore him.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
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| Re: Come Now by Joi |
richa 82.2.211.159 |
5-Sep-07/12:22 PM |
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Better than your last. Still a lot of you repeating yourself to no particular effect. Also numb is a terrible word choice in a poem by a grownup.
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| Re: floored by godspeed |
richa 82.2.211.159 |
5-Sep-07/12:19 PM |
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Poo does not coagulate. What are you some kind of dunce.
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| Re: floored by godspeed |
godspeed 81.151.114.183 |
5-Sep-07/11:20 AM |
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This is a true story.
True.
I'm not sure whose, though
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| Re: 1765: The Coventry Hangings by Caducus |
Caducus 88.108.37.117 |
5-Sep-07/5:27 AM |
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oh and 'coventry blue' was the colour renowned that coventry weavers produced until the early 20th century.
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| Re: 1765: The Coventry Hangings by Caducus |
Caducus 88.108.37.117 |
5-Sep-07/5:26 AM |
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Pippin and cofa are indiginous trees of coventry 'cofa tree' was where coventry derived.
After these hangings they were treated to a coating of hot tar and left to rot for 35 years - Coventry justice has never been the same since lol.
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| Re: a comment on Confetti by Caducus |
Caducus 88.108.37.117 |
5-Sep-07/5:24 AM |
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Nice one Rich I'll make the changes and add em to the tetto site. How's the HIAB?
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