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floored (Free verse) by godspeed [drip]
[drip]
[drip]
warm
yet cooling
slow progression
[drip]
the path
meanders
down
to
not hell
or
purgatory
or
even
[drip]
limbo
just
the
floor
the
bathroom floor
where your life
un-needed
coagulates
near dustbunnies
lost hairpins
and
a toenail clipping
polished
purple
Up the ladder:
Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis.
Down the ladder:
The Public Likes To Stare
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Posted: September 5, 2007 10:55 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2007 10:55 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9253 Comments:
Poo does not coagulate. What are you some kind of dunce.
yes, I am a dunce.
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True.
I'm not sure whose, though