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floored (Free verse) by godspeed
[drip] [drip] [drip] warm yet cooling slow progression [drip] the path meanders down to not hell or purgatory or even [drip] limbo just the floor the bathroom floor where your life un-needed coagulates near dustbunnies lost hairpins and a toenail clipping polished purple
Up the ladder: The Gate of Heaven
Down the ladder: wet/dry dreams/eyes
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9165
Posted: September 5, 2007 10:55 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2007 10:55 AM PDT
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[n/a] godspeed @ 81.151.114.183 | 5-Sep-07/11:20 AM | Reply
This is a true story.
True.
I'm not sure whose, though
[7] richa @ 82.2.211.159 | 5-Sep-07/12:19 PM | Reply
Poo does not coagulate. What are you some kind of dunce.
[n/a] godspeed @ 81.151.114.183 > richa | 7-Sep-07/11:27 AM | Reply
yes, I am a dunce.
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