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floored (Free verse) by godspeed

[drip] [drip] [drip] warm yet cooling slow progression [drip] the path meanders down to not hell or purgatory or even [drip] limbo just the floor the bathroom floor where your life un-needed coagulates near dustbunnies lost hairpins and a toenail clipping polished purple

richa 5-Sep-07/12:19 PM
Poo does not coagulate. What are you some kind of dunce.




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