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hoping (Free verse) by francis nor capule
what are the things that i have learned? i have learned that a heart is fragile ; so is truth. nothing is binding, not even youth. that the price of peace, is forever high . and love that is weak, would make you cry that people lie , and don't mean what they say . men would cheat , and shoo you away. but somehow through all this, there is hope i see. perhaps just enough for you and me. with enough patience and caring; probably tons of love. perhaps the sun would indeed shine, from up above. so i thank you, for finding me. or was it me who found you? serendpity , did it's part . and bought you close to heart...

Up the ladder: Desolation
Down the ladder: Show me the way

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9158
Posted: April 13, 2004 9:55 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 10:00 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 64.173.77.254 | 13-Apr-04/12:41 PM | Reply
s1 - s3 flow pretty well. I think that when you start a pattern like this, you commit yourself to follow it through to the end. When you change patterns midway through, it sends a reader wandering.
[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 26-May-04/10:57 AM | Reply
francis... what blinding and deafening love hath inspired this?
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