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hoping (Free verse) by francis nor capule
what are the things that i have learned?
i have learned that a heart is fragile ;
so is truth.
nothing is binding,
not even youth.
that the price of peace,
is forever high .
and love that is weak,
would make you cry
that people lie ,
and don't mean what they say .
men would cheat ,
and shoo you away.
but somehow through all this,
there is hope i see.
perhaps just enough for you and me.
with enough patience and caring;
probably tons of love.
perhaps the sun would indeed shine, from up above.
so i thank you, for finding me.
or was it me who found you?
serendpity , did it's part .
and bought you close to heart...
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Posted: April 13, 2004 9:55 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 10:00 AM PDT
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