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Dovina on Ode by James Rykelangeli 27 Feb 2005, 6:31 AM
Very funny and nicely done. It makes me laugh at myself. Welcome to Poemranker.
Dovina on How Do I Become a Poet? (with John B. Benitez) by Vince Dolamando 27 Feb 2005, 6:25 AM
Poetry is something you read after you have written it and eliminated the obvious mistakes. It's a fine point I know, but try to master it.
Dovina on Homecoming Parade by wilco 27 Feb 2005, 6:05 AM
Thought provoking. I can hear it with an acoustic guitar from a coffee house stool. Not bad.
Dovina replying on It’s the Management by Dovina 27 Feb 2005, 5:55 AM
A blatant and predictably sexist response.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on It’s the Management by Dovina 27 Feb 2005, 2:49 AM
9/11 was a tradegy for all concerned. But I think the term "boss man" contains redundancy, because all bosses are men by default. You might also consider replacing "lesser" with "female" :( -no vote-
James Rykelangeli on Oh holy shit by Lucifer 27 Feb 2005, 1:49 AM
A superb commentary on the mindset of today's international youth culture. Your vulgarity and absurdly emphasized rhyme scheme are in perfect keeping with their vulgar sexuality and lack of culture. Sublime.
James Rykelangeli on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom 27 Feb 2005, 1:19 AM
your imagery is pretty but vague and empty. specify. excise the banal phraseology: "connect the dots," "secrets... hidden in plain view." overall, though, with potential.
wilco on Forest Rain by bamf909 26 Feb 2005, 8:47 PM
One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.
some deleted user replying on I Love You by Blindpoetry 26 Feb 2005, 7:29 PM
Green Day is ok. I guess but they do kind of suck. Sorry RION12 I have to go with Blindpoetry.DON'T HURT ME LATER!!!!!
RION12 replying on I Love You by Blindpoetry 26 Feb 2005, 7:18 PM
Fuch you. If you think Green Day sucks you suck because they are great.
Dovina on As The Days Turn to Months by DevilBuni 26 Feb 2005, 5:24 PM
The first 2 verses say it all and pretty well. Consider dropping the last.
Dovina replying on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro 26 Feb 2005, 5:18 PM
That link - it's a good read.
bamf909 replying on Forest Rain by bamf909 26 Feb 2005, 9:59 AM
Thanks for the link. That was quite an informative site.
Dovina replying on It’s the Management by Dovina 26 Feb 2005, 7:05 AM
I'm gonna repost it, and make it clearer.
Dovina on Last Time by DevilBuni 26 Feb 2005, 6:58 AM
You must forgive INTRANSIT. He drives long hours in a semi on coffee. Don't get me wrong, his suggestions are good, and you'd do well to pay attention. But overall, you've got a good theme here.
Dovina replying on Hunger by Dovina 26 Feb 2005, 6:51 AM
You recently told someone that the 10 you gave him was the only sincere 10 you gave that day. Perhaps your comment flows from the same kind of reasoning that uses “your” as a contraction for “you are” because it’s “funny.” Or maybe it’s from the sort of logic that posits an implied proposition in this poem and than rents in vulgarities on the falsity of your straw man. Or the same kind of insight that claims world hunger as a an argument against what this poem is saying. Oh, guru of sensibility and logic, please teach on.
INTRANSIT on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro 26 Feb 2005, 6:43 AM
it's good to get this out of your system, but... http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=37680
INTRANSIT replying on It’s the Management by Dovina 26 Feb 2005, 6:41 AM
yes maam. gonna post a comment on alfies poem. Introduce an old poet. You might find it helpful. I still go here sometimes.
Dovina replying on It’s the Management by Dovina 26 Feb 2005, 6:38 AM
G'mornin' T-Driver. If your "Boss" comment above means that you think the boss in this pooem is a boss boss then you are the only one who thinks it means what I think it means.
Dovina replying on Jack and Jill by Dovina 26 Feb 2005, 6:31 AM
Friends anymore? My God, if that was friendship, what horrors lie ahead?