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As The Days Turn to Months (Free verse) by DevilBuni
As the days turn to months You cross my mind at times I wonder how you are If you're in a place you want to be If you're with people who you treat you well As the days turn to months I wonder if you think of me At random times as I do you Do you imagine what Im doing Or how I have changed? As the days turn to months Our feelings change with the time Our memories drift and begin to fade As does the pain and anger But I can never forget

Up the ladder: Let the Healing Begin
Down the ladder: I could rule myself

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5337
Posted: February 25, 2005 7:40 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2005 7:40 PM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 12.72.7.170 | 26-Feb-05/5:24 PM | Reply
The first 2 verses say it all and pretty well. Consider dropping the last.
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