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As The Days Turn to Months (Free verse) by DevilBuni

As the days turn to months You cross my mind at times I wonder how you are If you're in a place you want to be If you're with people who you treat you well As the days turn to months I wonder if you think of me At random times as I do you Do you imagine what Im doing Or how I have changed? As the days turn to months Our feelings change with the time Our memories drift and begin to fade As does the pain and anger But I can never forget

Dovina 26-Feb-05/5:24 PM
The first 2 verses say it all and pretty well. Consider dropping the last.




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