thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Feb 2005, 8:23 PM
Depends on whom is getting ready, and what they are preparing for.
<3 Jason
So this is a true story?
The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
lol, but no.
I made the boss man male because he is a man. I believe I could have written it with a woman boss, but that's not the way it was. Could you have written this story with either gender as protagonist or would you just let it pass if the boss were a woman?
a head.
loco in the head.
Retarded, stupid, crazy in the head.
what the fuck is a cavasa?
No. It's that Dark Bagel. And his AIDs obsession or whatever.
I understand and thank you for your comment...just one thing doesnt make sense to me.
Part B: wtf does this have to do with me? Are you saying you have a problem with my nick? Please refrain from commenting my handle and stick to the poetry.
And you need to be made airtight by three men of different socio-economic backgrounds.
It's a real shame you can't take criticism without resorting to base insults.
At first I was hurt by this comment...then I read YOUR poetry, and realized you hadn't gone through puberty yet...
I like it too. another kind of parade might make me happier. unless it's supposed to carry the undertones of war. Say, any relation to the "band" wilco?
poo
Ha ha.
You have finally cracked.