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zodiac on Your New Apartment by jessicazee 12 Mar 2005, 11:19 PM
Wicked.
zodiac on The Better Beggar by PodPoet 12 Mar 2005, 11:18 PM
Does anyone really wonder if beggars are worse than advertisers? Jesus.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Mar 2005, 11:18 PM
Actually this is about one of my little sister's friends hitting on me.
zodiac on Poem Will Come by PodPoet 12 Mar 2005, 11:15 PM
Is this why you keep reposting that wretched "Pumped Up" poem?
zodiac on Never Did You by Dreammaker1024 12 Mar 2005, 11:15 PM
This is simply awful. Can I make a recommendation? Please visit these poetry links: http://www.favoritepoem.org/poems/index.html http://www.slate.com/id/2114499/ http://www.poemranker.com/index.jsp And read until your eyeballs rupture. That's the only way your going to get close to writing a poem worth criticising. I'm not trying to be hard on you, by the way; that's seriously what everybody who wants to write presentable poetry has to do, and it shows in this poem that you haven't done it. Good luck, and let me know how it comes out! -zodiac
zodiac on Still, With Love by Dreammaker1024 12 Mar 2005, 11:10 PM
What a sad story... -10-
zodiac replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina 12 Mar 2005, 11:08 PM
And PS-If you were ever seriously confronted by the possibility that we weren't some roving gange of hooligans unreasonably banded together against you, but instead were sincerely and independently disgusted at the amount of muck illogic, bad grammar, email-forward subphilosophy, cronyism, and simply awful poetry you perpetrate on this site, would you jump screaming into your own uterus? I bet you would.
zodiac on Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Mar 2005, 11:00 PM
Your life is very dramatic. -10-
zodiac on The sparrow by woodstock20000 12 Mar 2005, 10:58 PM
"Little sparrow, little sparrow, Precious fragile little thing Little sparrow, little sparrow Flies so high and feels no pain." - Dolly Parton "Who will love a little Sparrow? Who's traveled far and cries for rest? 'Not I,' said the Oak Tree, 'I won't share my branches with no sparrow's nest, And my blanket of leaves won't warm her cold breast.' Who will love a little Sparrow And who will speak a kindly word? 'Not I,' said the Swan, 'The entire idea is utterly absurd, I'd be laughed at and scorned if the other Swans heard.'" - Paul Simon
zodiac on How I got my Jacket back by luzrheroguy 12 Mar 2005, 10:50 PM
If you've ever been closer to Amsterdam than Sacramento, I'm a cold cock. What I'm trying to say is, it shows.
zodiac on Sauvignon by Dovina 12 Mar 2005, 10:45 PM
Have you ever drunk a bottle of wine costing more than, oh, $10? This is not poetry. It's a bad idea on its last legs.
What do you mean by "here"? Are you in Iraq?
zodiac replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina 12 Mar 2005, 10:38 PM
1) Would you say you're more, or less, opinionated than other people? 2) Hey, thanks for pointing out that it's biased. I might have gone the rest of my life believing slate.com was a fair and balanced news source. 3) Unfortunately it's biased toward the side you're supposed to be on (pretty moderate liberalism), and it still thinks you're one of them. 4) And Slate writers are about a dozen times smarter than you. 5) I would be horrified at the suggestion (from anyone, really, except you) that I was either a hopeless conservative hick or shared qualities with hopeless conservative hicks. But then, I'm not the one the article's describing. You are. 6) And thanks a lot for demonstrating how bow'ls isn't a real usage, how the "renegade poet comedians" you hate now are somehow different from the stuffy bastions of conservative poetry you hated a few months ago, or anything else to justify anything in this post. You're a total clod when it comes to arguing anything.
Dovina on The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle 12 Mar 2005, 5:46 PM
I rarely say this because it's a bum rule, but Show, don't Tell.
Dovina on Deep Thought by Dreammaker1024 12 Mar 2005, 5:44 PM
Not really a poem.
Dan garcia-Black on Sauvignon by Dovina 12 Mar 2005, 5:26 PM
2buckchuck&awinesnob. This is a lovely cock-tale of deceit.-10-
no one is commending saddam here, though perhaps the women should............(they got more rights then they do now).........
crooked_smile replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:15 PM
why thankyou
crooked_smile replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:14 PM
that wouldnt be much to brag about - lia
crooked_smile replying on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:12 PM
of course i read your comment - lia