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Poem Will Come (Other) by PodPoet
I can't yet write a poem for you Locked in your grip The lucky, the few Can't break free Or even step back a ways Can't see a thing Through this luscious haze Slumber and laugh Soak it it up, splash around Taste the sweet success Of this pleasure I've found It will seep deep in me Through and through Before I can write a poem Worthy of you

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10289
Posted: January 12, 2005 6:28 PM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2005 11:08 PM PST
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[7] zodiac @ 212.118.11.13 | 12-Mar-05/11:15 PM | Reply
Is this why you keep reposting that wretched "Pumped Up" poem?
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