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Still, With Love (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
Iâve seen him so many times, and no matter how his appearance changes,
I fall for him still. To me he is not close to perfect, at times he may
be a bit too silly, and can tend to look un kept, but I fall for him all
over again still.
At a time I use to believe that this little affair would someday end,
but I now know that if ever heâs near, Iâll still fall once more.
No matter how many perfect moments he ruins, the ones that we have
shared outweigh the many mistakes. And I have this lying tendency to
tell others and myself that if I knew in the beginning of us what I know
now, I would of made myself stop from falling... but I know that
somewhere down my life's path I would have fallen anyway still. I donâ
t want to say that weâve been written in the stars but I canât think
of any other reason why I adore him so.
He constantly sees me as his friend, his confident, someone to tell his
girl problems to, and yet I stay. He may not see it now, but I do, and
I know my feelings for him are great enough to carry us through. For
all of this time is just a series of baby steps for our future, because
when he looks at me through those eyes, no matter the situation, I canâ
t help but shiver... and I fall for him yet still.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7065
Posted: January 23, 2005 2:07 PM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2005 9:07 PM PST
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