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UNTITLED (Free verse) by deuce0420
I care not of her beauty Although it be intoxicating I only desire her heart I'm sure to her this is surprising She being the one thats never felt true love While I know only the pain of that exact thing She feels an emptiness and knows not why To her life,so much happiness I could bring But I step aside in quiet haste Stunned by the realization that I'll necver her kiss Maybe it is for the best After all ignorance is bliss

Up the ladder: Passing of Wind
Down the ladder: Invisible

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7101
Posted: August 24, 2005 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2005 4:15 PM PDT
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[8] bellafuego @ 199.77.249.2 | 25-Aug-05/9:49 AM | Reply
"necver"?
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