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UNTITLED (Free verse) by deuce0420
I care not of her beauty
Although it be intoxicating
I only desire her heart
I'm sure to her this is surprising
She being the one thats never felt true love
While I know only the pain of that exact thing
She feels an emptiness and knows not why
To her life,so much happiness I could bring
But I step aside in quiet haste
Stunned by the realization that I'll necver her kiss
Maybe it is for the best
After all ignorance is bliss
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7101
Posted: August 24, 2005 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2005 4:15 PM PDT
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