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UNTITLED (Free verse) by deuce0420

I care not of her beauty Although it be intoxicating I only desire her heart I'm sure to her this is surprising She being the one thats never felt true love While I know only the pain of that exact thing She feels an emptiness and knows not why To her life,so much happiness I could bring But I step aside in quiet haste Stunned by the realization that I'll necver her kiss Maybe it is for the best After all ignorance is bliss

bellafuego 25-Aug-05/9:49 AM
"necver"?




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