...........Always Beautiful ..........

that's really a nice poem...

very good...that's really a nice poem ..

that's really a nice poem ........

I see the dictionary was opened to D for dung-or-eeeeees.

What fun in the dandilions, I remember it well.

You captured a moment of us all. Very well wrighten.-9-

Innocent insight.

i love this line" by an ever-present waiting"

Yes, such despair, deprivation, disilusionment and misconception. All is void of hope and any glimmer of happiness. Hey, might as well eat, drink and be merry.

good poem, seems you beat me too it, i like it -10-

'I Got a Girl' was a song by Tripping Daisy, the lead was Tim DeLaughter who went on to form the Polyphonic Spree.

Why, oh why does poemranker occasionally throw up misanthropes with such stultifying perspicacity as to render the whole website as redundant as a mid-month jam rag?

Fuck the Irish and skidding clouds. Everytime I read your words I want to dry-hump your leg until I wear my ridge off.

ha ha ha haaaaa... whore.

what did the tampon say to the leper?

This is what I expect my kids will feel when I die. It's bearable, compared to having to live with their mother.

Enriched by too many big words, demanding more than a second reading to mean our world so full of despairs of

I would only shorten some of the phrases, otherwise great. For example: narrowed to less than alone, pulled beneath the ruin of was, dropped upon the broken promise of forever - a restless drunken dream

Hey...I didnt rate you..I dont leave comments or rate anyone..but I guess if it should that I rated you a one it must of been my friend. She is the one that reads the comments and replay to them if she wishes. All I do is post my poems. I read a few of them and I though they where good. So heres te ~10~ you deserve not a one. Tell me what peom you got rated a one so I could change that. bye bye always Ruby.