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Waiting (Free verse) by Spindle The days, it seems, have gotten longer
And, in their length, have gotten shorter
My hours, minutes, seconds are consumed
By an ever-present waiting
Up the ladder:
Paradise
Down the ladder:
Let Go
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Posted: August 22, 2004 9:12 PM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2004 9:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10581 Comments:
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Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.140
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23-Aug-04/1:36 AM
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i love this line" by an ever-present waiting"
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