damn already talk about autumn.

i feel you

now this, I like.

very good ..

Forgetfulness is bliss. By the way <3?

well done.. i like the meaning of it, too.

Very well spoken Bratsy. Fix the last line of the fourth stanza,and stanza six, pain. Just read them slowly before you submit.

very good..i love the theme of poem ..and i think it's something i can understand deeply ,...

very good ...that's really a nice poem

Are you really 22 yrs old? Lord Jesu's benevolent ball sack!

nice to know time away from here doesn't change much... you still suck

It would seem he found his strength in Catholicism. But it is better to be a true Catholic, than to pretend to be.

A nicely told story. Might want to call it a Prose Poem.

wow, good poem, seems you beat me to one as well, i guess i'll have to try mine now, wont be as good as this though -10-

Dear Doug, Please disregard the fatuous remarks above, they are a weak attempt to curry favour with you. We all know the only way to curry favour is to get an ethnic to do it. Your bestest friend in whole world, Stephen Throbbington Robins

11 anonymous votes of which 10 are 10's. Did you have to ask complete strangers to use their computers? or did you just go the whole way around California looking for internet cafes. Anyway here is a real vote from the heart.

I like the way you have indented "Spirits". So queer, but yet so gay. Do you have a big pair of bristols or a tiny pair of thr'p'nnies?

Crystal are you experimenting with cock again? You know it will lead to more fractures in your pelvis and your ribs haven't even fused from the last time you tried to rub off with you heavily banadaged and split fingers over horus' picture. You don't want to have to go back in the brace do you? All beacuse you couldn't resist a small leaking tramp's gutter pipe.

Dear Doug, Why'd you delete my comment? That sort of runs counter to the thrust of your liberal minded theology does it not? I don't go around in a huff deleting others comments because I do not agree with them; that would make me a facist censor who would quite happily pogromise the entire site of people who disagree with my opinons. Take my constructive criticism as it is intended Doug othrwise you run the risk of becoming an insufferable Nazi. And zodiac is a jew so you don't want to offend him do you? Take my comment as it is intended Doug. Worried, SW11.

You have ripped this off the errant rantings of a tramp on a soapbox at Hyde Park Corner. He had one more listner than the vote I have just awarded you.