poemranker ::Anthony & Kimberly by Brandy_n_Cali

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Free verse № 110915

Anthony & Kimberly

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

Driving down that road day after day. I never thoght he would leave us this way. He left representing what we all knew he loved. He is now watching and protecting her from above. They were in love but no one could see. The only one not blind seemed to be me. The glow on her face when he walked into a room, the anticipation in his eyes knowing she would be there soon. In one minute it was all over, some say "If only he were driving slower" But, no one knows what happened, no one could see. Maybe it was all just meant to be. Rest In Peace Mr.Castillo, watch over Kim and never let her go.

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[7] Prince of Void 24-Aug-04/2:18 AM Reply
very good..i love the theme of poem ..and i think it's something i can understand deeply ,...
[n/a] leonxic 24-Aug-04/10:41 AM Reply
meh.
[2] nentwined 7-Sep-04/8:29 PM Reply
double meh.