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Endless Loop Of Dot Dot (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
What is good about nothing? Can't we change something In this neurotical world? dot dot And I will Crash me No one will stop me From making my own decisions... From learning from past mistakes... If I don't screw up... dot dot I will never learn Will it make me Crash? The number of times I've been insulted in the past Is un-countable Can I call names too? dot dot Why... That would be absurd... Now, I... Crash

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7608
Posted: April 8, 2004 5:56 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2004 6:21 PM PDT
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[8] Phalkon @ 205.188.116.140 | 17-May-04/5:38 PM | Reply
dude, you should post a lot of this stuff into the blind forum!
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