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Your Fable (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Your filfy lies haunt me Like flies around a repugnant dumpster Your fake loving kills me Like a murdering monster And my heart plunges into the puddle of blood near my feet The smell of your lies it may constantly reak I know your life is full of depression And how much you recieve a day is outragious And I'm beginning to think its contagious Your fables are filled with lies Filled with tries Towards love -Something in your dreams Something you desire With the pages of your fable, may your dreams burn In the blood of the fire...

Up the ladder: she.
Down the ladder: sit place

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7609
Posted: January 14, 2004 3:32 PM PST; Last modified: January 14, 2004 3:32 PM PST
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