Bachus
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2004, 6:49 PM
A dungsickle
It's like eating vagina, but while being a midget.
Are you in cahouts with mother nature?
Ace!
Filth.
Ha ha ha...
"it's" should be its
Heroin kicks ass
"it's" should be its
Naughty naughty.
Mediocrity code: 11F01001
Woah. Deepness. -10- If there were a higher number, you'd get it. Very very nice. :)
Mr.Garcia, I love your stuff. And it's not a word I use lightly. Another hit, man.
I was Jack's tampon of security
Decent
I love the word solitude...u know there is a short-film called "depth of solitude" in that film i really get the depth of solitude ..and its concept was wonderful
This reminds me of Fight Club. Not bad. I think some of the lines could be cut out to make a tighter package and I'm not sure about the word smelt but overall, not bad.
I like it.
Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.