how many syllables is moisturiser...4?

lol

Dig it.

I have not seen the painting, but already think I know how it looks from your vivid description. Could you post a link to it?

It may very well be that I just like a simple peice of literature. Then again, I am certainly no expert on how to tell people who to write. Thus, I will leave my absolute opinionated vote.

lol nice. ur an ass. haha.

Let down.

Once I woke up to find that a thin old man was pressing his sagging buttocks against my face. "Who are you?!" I muffledly asked, frantically secreting from my Panic-nozzle. "Parp!" replied the buttocks.

Well I'm glad you got how you were feeling out. Keep your chin up, if that person doesn't realize what a good friend you are, then that's their loss. I know you've probably heard those very same words spoken to you a million times before, but its the truth. Out of pure curiosity, I'm just wondering how old you are?

I love a good rhyming scheme :)

Hah, I like the title most of all. -9-

You could call this one a lyrical too, no? Yea, I'd buy this single.

If only God took time from his "busy" schedule to read. :) I like it.

"bunch of kids getting wasted I had a future but I misplaced it" Great line.

dont try so hard to make things rhyme but i like the set up

head and mead dont rhyme

I really, really hate Haiku's. This is my first one ever. Tell me, public, does this Haiku pass as standable?

"what I feel is so deep and wide" is the best to date of your many descriptions of anal sex. -10-

Your writing's getting stronger, but God the way your mind works... Is ah... Bland.

Your knowledge of history needs a good punting.