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Yeah, Maybe

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

Plastic pedals in my head Cotton Fiber giving me what I need Everyone will admit to what they don't do Not quite sure if it was them... Or me Yeah, maybe - just me Running wheels across my head Natural Gases giving me what I want No one will admit to what they did Not quite sure if it was real... Or a dream Yeah, maybe - just dreaming Injecting needles in my head Artificial Happiness giving me what I don't want Everyone will admit to what they don't find Not quite sure if it was the instructions... Or the map Yeah, maybe - just the map Crosshairs in my head Laser Light giving me what I really want No one will admit to what they find Not quite sure if it was game Or the seriousness Yeah, maybe - just seriousness

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[7] Rollsoftoiletpaper 16-Oct-04/7:58 PM Reply
You could call this one a lyrical too, no? Yea, I'd buy this single.