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Once Sought (Free verse) by necroscope7
Once sought I the source of joy
Scouring hill, valley, and dale
But the joy I found at the end of my search
Was old and used and stale
Once sought I the source of love
Where'er it might like to hide
But when I found it amongst the woodlands
It seemed that love had died
Once sought I the source of life
Struggling, straining to reach
But when I reached the summit of life
All there was was a rotten peach
Once sought me joy, love, and life
To give me the gifts that each could
But I was searching the wrong place for each
And did not perceive them where I should
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.6
Overall Rank: 12523
Posted: June 6, 2002 7:48 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 7:48 AM PDT
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