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Spread my Wings (Free verse) by Samantha
Away, fly spread my wings each inch peirces my flesg following deadly stings far beneath the tears falling from my face. this life, person i am, is that all a waste? when you stand there can you see me? im not anywhere i am left behind, deeper my fingers grind redder, and thicker to the bone i can bein to find nails and thorns peirce through my breast Never does it stop till the final rest. Away, fly spread my wings the beating slowly stops the sing why cant i fly? God, make me a bird, fly far far away, fly higher and higher it flows down my throat drive it farther into my soul The world is circling around in this tiny boat. my destination i cant make out spinning faster and faster screaming at the top of my lungs, disaster Take my life, Take it now, not tomorrow, not today NOW, i cant stay the tears drop from my wrist, thank you mr knife where were you god? Not near me, save me! Im falling, begging, take me, make me see Away, fly spread my wings My face so cold, black dress surround. Thank-YOU! As my funeral bells ring.

Up the ladder: I still love you
Down the ladder: Once Sought

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12517
Posted: January 26, 2004 6:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2004 6:12 PM PST
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