7!3
on Subdued by blindwriter
21 Nov 2004, 5:32 AM
first long poem i bothered reading on
A few trite lines here and there, but overall a good read.
Here again, several useless inserts that, contrary to popular opinion, don't serve to hold a piece together, but depreciate it's value.
I like the third stanza. Masterful.
lol
mm...yes.
thats fucking nice.
Shit happen to me like that one time. I liked the woman
but she thought the only way she could keep me was to keep me fucked up and that shit played out.
You are a deeply confused, silly person.
The last thing he said to me was:
âDovina! others may deprive you of your material wealth and cheat you in a thousand ways, but no man can deprive you of the control and use of your imagination. That's why I say nothing in the world is more dangerous than sincere Ignorance and conscientious stupidity. I am sure that I'm going to get some kind of smart comment from someone, but understand! What people think of me isn't any of my business. And I would like for you to remember that my friend.â
I didnât know how sick he was, and told him that I was going to think about âsincere ignoranceâ and âconscientious stupidityâ because I believed they would have more to say in time. I am keeping that promise and hope those important words will soon ripen into something he would appreciate. I never met him except here on poemranker, but I believe he was a good man.
Poemwanker here i come, give me my wings.
Can you tell me where these lyrics are from, please someone know.
I understand, and I sympathize.
Jesus wept.
Please do not post things you have not written. This sucks no matter who, and I don't care, wrote it.
good lines:
But I don't talk to Myself;
Myself talks to Me.
Overall, this is too wordy with too many grammar mistakes.
The beginning was rough, but I liked the ending.. alot of the middle seemed a bit like filler to me. I bless thee with the almighty -7-. Go in peace.
Goddamn... thats fucking classic. Ten.
Wow! I've been trying to get poenranker to come up all day without success. Yesterday was little better. Other sites work fine, so it's at Kaolin's end.
This poem was on top of the Recent heap, and I was lucky enough to see a good one first. It sounds a bit like some of the letters Civil War soldiers wrote to their sweethearts when chances were they'd never meet again. But yours is more eloquently written.
what a gay poem
mike this is really stupid but a
.........1212121212 thats waht u get
This sounds like an accurately kept transcript of the night. The last stanza could be the first and nothing would be lost.