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Maiden, Maiden (Other) by blindwriter
Maiden, maiden, rest in peace Who wiped abroad the sprinkling stars And painted Jupiter and Mars Can move all hell at his release Suspending earth within a line Gently folding Shards of time And tucking us within the crease Can grant you, maiden, sweet surcease Maiden, maiden, rest in peace Maiden, maiden, gentle be Who charts the wind and carves its way Who molecules and men obey Can pour his breath all over me Merging swirling, ambient hues Could paint the thoughts The scholars muse And, blending in the cup of tea The universe within the sea Maiden, maiden, gentle be Maiden, maiden, cry no more Whose skies erupt and overflow Pulsating eyes to shine below And pierce the silent, ocean floor Who blows your dresses, blows away The tears you lost In words you pray The future yet is gone before The pages, lost forevermore Maiden, maiden, cry no more

Up the ladder: Laughing
Down the ladder: In prison I live,

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7958
Posted: November 20, 2004 3:12 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 3:12 AM PST
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Comments:
[7] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 20-Nov-04/5:41 PM | Reply
Transvestites selling lube do not a maiden make.
[n/a] blindwriter @ 219.47.92.71 | 21-Nov-04/10:09 PM | Reply
I understand, and I sympathize.
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