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Guinness (Free verse) by Dovina
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His friends walk out at midnight
from Darganâs Pub and Ale House.
He thinks about driving home,
then orders another brew.
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âIâm a good guy with a few habits,â he says,
and slapping his Guinness on the bar,
âI work hard and like a good time.â
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As we share a final beer,
he refuses to blame a woman,
does not even accuse the help.
What a good sport he is.
I give him style points for honesty.
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Heâs a good man to talk to,
goes down like a pina colada,
smooth and sweet.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7412
Posted: November 24, 2004 6:22 PM PST; Last modified: November 24, 2004 6:22 PM PST
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