yea you should delete this guy, he's a dick

if there was anything lower than a zero, you would recieve it!!! wow another site where ignorence runs rampant. oh well can't blame you, you didn't know better!!! ignorence is bliss

A fine bedtime image of childhood.

del del delete me!!! come on its easy!!! kill me ill me fulfill me, creature of this site(ha a lil rocky for ya)

So much angst. I'm glad you found a way to vent: bitching, and calling it poetry. Good try! 1!

TOO. CALAMITY. Microsoft(C) Word Spell Checker.

Too funny. Just enough similarity to make us wonder.

It starts out on a good path, but wanders into netherland, losing focus.

Both well done and rare at the same time. Excellent.

Do any of your poemes rhyme? I just tried going through the rigmarole of checking each one to see, but only got through the first three before thinking "Sod this, I'll just ask her if any of them rhyme". Well? Do they? Nearly all my poemes rhyme.

I don't think it's good..Maybe because I keep reading it over and over...I need some opinions here.

I don't think it's good either. Too plain. And doesn't make sense that you want the bruises to remain. Sorry

Funny. bitching about people who bitch.

Too vague and too misspelled.

Decaying limbs do not sprout, only live ones do. And stop whining about needing a little help. A live limb waits and is always ready.

Dear Poemranking addicts, How do you get onto poemranker? Over the past five days, I have tried five computers, mac's and PC's, dial-up, DSL, and cable modem, all with no connection to poemranker, or as today only after waiting an hour just to get logged in. The problem is at kaolin's end, and I have emailed him twice, with no answer. I suppose that if he flakes out, dies, or loses the server for some reason, then poemranker and everything on it dies. I wish I had copied more of what seemed important here before the thing died. Now its too late unless by some slim chance it comes back up. Sorry to bleed all over your poem, but it's the only page that came up. I will miss some of you, and think about some you in other ways, Bye, Dovina

I guess I can understand why you want the bruises to remain as long as possible; to serve as a reminder, proof. But like Dovina said, it's too plain.

Just out of interest what exactly will you be suing for.

A few problems: Jesus was not Mary's only son. Mary did not remove Jesus from the cross. Rhymes are meant to aid a poem's flow, not contort it. "remember them today" Mary was there for very few of the impoirtant events of His life. You listed fewer than 7 sorrows. "then she and Joseph"

Great poem! Wish I had your talent girl ;) 10/10