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leaning back to far (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 a cold touch
a blistering boil
leaning back to far
cought up in flames
kindeling hearts fading
smoke is rising
far away from you
the moment is in the dust
i look in agony
to see such a calamitie
is there a way
is there hope?
only to lean back to far
Up the ladder:
Between the Edges
Down the ladder:
Lines and half lines
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Posted: November 25, 2004 4:56 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2004 4:56 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.230521 Overall Rank: 4239 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
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25-Nov-04/10:18 PM
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Too vague and too misspelled.
TOO. CALAMITY. Microsoft(C) Word Spell Checker.
Is this about chair safety? It's brilliant.
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