poemranker ::leaning back to far by celticskatermatt1

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Free verse № 116048

leaning back to far

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Nov 2004 · 3 comments

a cold touch a blistering boil leaning back to far cought up in flames kindeling hearts fading smoke is rising far away from you the moment is in the dust i look in agony to see such a calamitie is there a way is there hope? only to lean back to far

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[6] Dovina 25-Nov-04/10:18 PM Reply
Too vague and too misspelled.
[n/a] leonxic 27-Nov-04/10:47 AM Reply
TOO. CALAMITY. Microsoft(C) Word Spell Checker.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Dec-04/12:15 PM Reply
Is this about chair safety? It's brilliant.