Poemranker [Poem: leaning back to far] [by celticskatermatt1] Thu Nov 21 13:29:53 PST 2024

leaning back to far (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

a cold touch a blistering boil leaning back to far cought up in flames kindeling hearts fading smoke is rising far away from you the moment is in the dust i look in agony to see such a calamitie is there a way is there hope? only to lean back to far

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4243

Posted: November 25, 2004 4:56 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2004 4:56 PM PST
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Comments:

[6] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 25-Nov-04/10:18 PM | Reply

Too vague and too misspelled.

[n/a] leonxic @ 80.205.204.178 | 27-Nov-04/10:47 AM | Reply

TOO. CALAMITY. Microsoft(C) Word Spell Checker.

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 | 5-Dec-04/12:15 PM | Reply

Is this about chair safety? It's brilliant.

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