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Free verse № 116051

Bitches

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Nov 2004 · 2 comments

I hate all you people You bullshit everyone Then you go home and cry When the day is all done You bitch and you whine About every little thing You can’t even accept A fake plastic ring No it has to be gold 24 carrots at that And if it’s not right You’ll just take it back You don’t see the real me The one locked up inside When I am around you I just make it hide If I showed you the truth You’d all run away So I just won’t tell you All I have to say You talk to me like a friend And then just bitch and then leave You break my loving heart And rip my warming sleeve I don’t know what to say When I see you around town I try to talk to you But you only bring me down I try to be friends with you But you just push me away Then come back and bitch again About not talking to me yesterday You don’t really want to talk to me You just think it’s true You just want to laugh at my faults And get me down and blue I try to be nice And not scream and shout But sooner or later It’s all gonna come out And I’ll let it come at you And show the real me Maybe then you’ll understand Maybe then you’ll see But for now it’s all hidden Deep down inside For now it will remain hidden For you it will hide

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[6] Dovina 25-Nov-04/10:16 PM Reply
Funny. bitching about people who bitch.
[1] leonxic 27-Nov-04/10:43 AM Reply
So much angst. I'm glad you found a way to vent: bitching, and calling it poetry. Good try! 1!