Bitches (Free verse) by blackdeathangel6
I hate all you people
You bullshit everyone
Then you go home and cry
When the day is all done
You bitch and you whine
About every little thing
You canât even accept
A fake plastic ring
No it has to be gold
24 carrots at that
And if itâs not right
Youâll just take it back
You donât see the real me
The one locked up inside
When I am around you
I just make it hide
If I showed you the truth
Youâd all run away
So I just wonât tell you
All I have to say
You talk to me like a friend
And then just bitch and then leave
You break my loving heart
And rip my warming sleeve
I donât know what to say
When I see you around town
I try to talk to you
But you only bring me down
I try to be friends with you
But you just push me away
Then come back and bitch again
About not talking to me yesterday
You donât really want to talk to me
You just think itâs true
You just want to laugh at my faults
And get me down and blue
I try to be nice
And not scream and shout
But sooner or later
Itâs all gonna come out
And Iâll let it come at you
And show the real me
Maybe then youâll understand
Maybe then youâll see
But for now itâs all hidden
Deep down inside
For now it will remain hidden
For you it will hide
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Weighted score: 4.6125903
Overall Rank: 12465
Posted: November 25, 2004 5:03 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2004 5:03 PM PST
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