Lifeboatman
on Mallard by richa
21 Dec 2004, 4:39 AM
good.. 10.. I'm having duck tonight
ouch.. 10
Intelligent.. 7
hehe.. 10
dude, you have no idea what you are talking about.. 0
galing!!! 10
Renee Blue Eyes!! Dedication your love surely!!
Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.
Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.
I meant to put "Dedication TO your love...". A typo!!
Okay, that's not bad, not bad at all. But it could be made better with some more uniformity in your stanzas. The flow breaks a little too often!!
Wow!! That's indeed one of the most unique poems I've read in any of the poetry sites. Not flawless definitely, but better than most stuff.
Love the weave of words. Check me out if you could!!
The rhymes are kinda not very uniform. Nice imagery though!! A 7 from me!!
Kinda cliched!! No offences but I have just read too much of these stuff lately. The expression is just about fine though!!
That took me around 20 minutes!! Very impressive work, indeed!!!
Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
That's bloody cruel!! A 7 from me!!
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