Re: Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry	Dovina 12.72.7.139	14-Apr-05/7:19 AM
If he were truly an architect, he would not refer to his prints by the antiquated "blueprints" or draw their originals with compas and straight edge, but with CAD.
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 64.60.192.130	14-Apr-05/10:17 AM
Very sweet.
Re: In Due Time by DeadtotheWorld	the_poetess 205.188.116.139	14-Apr-05/1:30 PM
this is almost too weird but not quite
Re: Let Go by PunkyPanda	not_a_philosopher 205.188.116.139	14-Apr-05/2:34 PM
i understand the emotion and have felt it before, but you need to lighten up on the language, and edit it some before it is really good
Re: 16-66 by kingit	not_a_philosopher 205.188.116.139	14-Apr-05/2:35 PM
love it
Re: Letter to the Horsehead Nebula by Tangerines	not_a_philosopher 205.188.116.139	14-Apr-05/2:39 PM
nice poem, but you are wrong, this is what it is to be alive and happy one could also say, that "i woke and could not believe i was still alive / i wished so much that i could die/ im stunned at the pain that the world is filled with / what kind of meaning can one find in this life......and afterward, when is tep out to get the paper/ i am overcome by the futility of it all/ gowing through the motions/ i feel the sharp air stabbing my lungs, look somebody just died/ this is what it is to be alive / everything is a mistake the stars / are mocking me with their happiness/ how can they enjoy being lonely/ at night i stand outside staring/ at the sky, distant planets and suns/stunned by the vast expanse of the universe/ in which i am the source of nothing/ nothing good, nothing evil/ i am nothing and am of no importance/ not even my name will be remembered just throwing that out there -megan
Re: I… the blank paper of unsaid things by Prince of Void	Blindpoetry 70.186.160.225	14-Apr-05/3:07 PM
Unless my age deprives me of known knowledge, I thought that this was a very good piece. Well, unique, anyways.
Re: a conversation by crooked_smile	Blindpoetry 70.186.160.225	14-Apr-05/3:24 PM
obsessive yuck
Re: Grasping Smoke by Luzr	Goad 80.132.254.163	14-Apr-05/3:39 PM
I have a question for you: did she 10 every single one of your pomes the instant it appeared? And did that like totally turn you off? That would turn me off so hard that by the tenth ten I doubt I would even be able to make eye contact any more. That said, this is pretty decent pome, even though I'm a rabid anti-smoker. Though I do occasionally imbibe smoke in it's more expensive liquid form.
Re: believing by whispern_smoke_wisp	Dovina 12.72.12.45	14-Apr-05/4:04 PM
Why do you expect that a god we all decide to believe in will bring peace? How many of the others have brought peace?
Re: Freedom by shadows	Dovina 12.72.12.45	14-Apr-05/4:16 PM
Freedom is not realizing that the masses are safer without it.
Re: wonder by the_poetess	Dovina 12.72.12.45	14-Apr-05/4:18 PM
Our wonder will stay right where it is.
Re: Butterfly Plague by zodiac	Sashaclese 169.229.90.119	14-Apr-05/5:02 PM
Well, you see? You convinced me to vote, and a god-almighty vote it is, indeed. And self-righteous, and controversy-evoking. Stay mediocre, yo. --0--
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	storyspinner 68.67.205.23	14-Apr-05/8:38 PM
This is remarkable. Sweet and smooth. Very well done.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	storyspinner 68.67.205.23	14-Apr-05/8:45 PM
Stunning! Crisp and clean. Remarkably distant sounding with so much more emotion hinted at actually said.
Re: Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire	storyspinner 68.67.205.23	14-Apr-05/8:47 PM
Oh, lovely!
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.110	15-Apr-05/12:54 AM
Sweet Jesus! The Best AIDS poem ever.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Apr-05/2:04 AM
Ace - really glad your back ranking.
Re: THE EPIC OF THE -- TRANSEXUAL -- FROG by Sashaclese	Goad 213.61.217.3	15-Apr-05/4:13 AM
Clearly the work of a master, a ribald genius to rival the very originator of the English Literature. I respectfully doff my head covering in your general direction, sirrah.
Re: Butterfly Plague by zodiac	Goad 213.61.217.3	15-Apr-05/4:17 AM
Muted, soft, grey and lovely; with a flash of exhilaration at the end. Wonderful.