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Freedom (Free verse) by shadows
freedom is knowing that we are all just watching shadows on the wall, knowing we are shackled to the deep undergrounds of ignorance, bound by our own existance to our near intolerable human condition. freedom is knowing that even if we were all 100% free in the most democratic of ways no one would be any happier because freadom is realizing that masses are safer with out it, realizing that they are safer thinking they are more free than they are or ever could be

Up the ladder: Pain
Down the ladder: SO LONG MY BELOVED

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9848
Posted: April 14, 2005 12:48 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 12:48 PM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 12.72.12.45 | 14-Apr-05/4:16 PM | Reply
Freedom is not realizing that the masses are safer without it.
[6] zodiac @ 212.118.19.111 | 15-Apr-05/11:09 PM | Reply
This poem is utterly illogical. Bush actually says it better, and that's saying a lot.
[4] Christof @ 62.121.23.56 | 16-Apr-05/4:48 AM | Reply
Are you a fascist?No, really?
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