or to like

utterly disgusting spelling.

Oh my Fucking Howdy! Man...this just plain tires me out. I'm not voting on this.

Jimmy Buffet said it better. "Wasting away again in Margaritaville..."

liquid and casual

this makes a good Lyric.

not sure if the promotion is to her position at home, or if she's been promoted at work. other than that, i like what you've done. but that one part could be clearer.

very nicely done.

nice elaboration on a theme.

this has a nice playful feel to it, but "i love you" feels a bit over the top.

nice.

well told.

somehow i feel this one might have been more effective written from the engineer's point of view.

and...? i want more from this.

tell me why buildable is awesome in the beginning and I will begin to care. I think you have a grand character sketch here if you give it another go.

Much better.

I like the depth of your work Darby.

Oh. Why'd you post it here, then? PS-Reply to comments by clicking on the green 'Reply' button. That's right next to the red 'X' which you already know about.

“'I’m in love,' I said to you right in front of your mother" Outstanding

f me for reading this.