regarding some deleted poem...	tisa7 205.188.116.139	18-Jul-05/4:14 PM
or to like
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.19.130	19-Jul-05/12:41 AM
Oh. Why'd you post it here, then? PS-Reply to comments by clicking on the green 'Reply' button. That's right next to the red 'X' which you already know about.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:03 AM
utterly disgusting spelling.
Re: The sunset sea. by darby pyn	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:05 AM
Oh my Fucking Howdy! Man...this just plain tires me out. I'm not voting on this.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:07 AM
Jimmy Buffet said it better. "Wasting away again in Margaritaville..."
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:09 AM
liquid and casual
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.160.116.179	20-Jul-05/2:47 AM
“'I’m in love,' I said to you right in front of your mother" Outstanding
Re: CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:43 AM
this makes a good Lyric.
Re: Moving Up by jessicazee	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:46 AM
not sure if the promotion is to her position at home, or if she's been promoted at work. other than that, i like what you've done. but that one part could be clearer.
Re: the smallest box will do by elderking	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:52 AM
very nicely done.
Re: Inoculation by bamf909	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:54 AM
nice elaboration on a theme.
Re: Oh this little mouse, love by cpill	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:56 AM
this has a nice playful feel to it, but "i love you" feels a bit over the top.
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:57 AM
nice.
Re: Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:58 AM
well told.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:03 AM
somehow i feel this one might have been more effective written from the engineer's point of view.
Re: Break Free by Fayt	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:05 AM
and...? i want more from this.
Re: she sits back and judges me by hendrimike	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.21.224	20-Jul-05/12:38 PM
f me for reading this.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	20-Jul-05/7:46 PM
tell me why buildable is awesome in the beginning and I will begin to care. I think you have a grand character sketch here if you give it another go.
Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	21-Jul-05/7:22 AM
Much better.
Re: The sunset sea. by darby pyn	Nuit 86.128.125.194	21-Jul-05/4:04 PM
I like the depth of your work Darby.