Re: Drops of Pain by PoeticOne	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:24 PM
The only thing I have to offer for a comment is...I have chocolate..and am willing to share... :)
Re: No More Tomorrows by PoeticOne	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:28 PM
This is good...hmmmm sadness,hurt,pain,lost love...yup...all the right ingredients to make me feel this poem... :)
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:35 PM
not many poems make me read it like going to a movie...yours did...great movie... :)
Re: On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:38 PM
I think limerick,s are funny and yours are fun...wtg :)
Re: untitled by AaronJKeating	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:43 PM
YES!!!
Re: In My Words by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 81.135.219.214	3-Aug-05/5:23 PM
Oh yes, a new creation after so much time!
Re: In My Words by RGSsparky	pennymarie 4.246.15.235	3-Aug-05/11:36 PM
cool... just spit those words out and smash them against a rock and see what ya get .. cute very cute Penny
Re: Drops of Pain by PoeticOne	pennymarie 4.246.15.235	3-Aug-05/11:39 PM
I like the general concept.. maybe just look it over again and see if you can wrap it up and put some finishing touches on this master piece.... peace Penny
Re: You can never go back! by pennymarie	PoeticOne 24.43.122.90	4-Aug-05/7:28 AM
I really like this a lot! Your style and wording are great! Keep it up!
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 67.42.178.244	4-Aug-05/9:04 AM
You joyfully got my attention with your obvious dislike of my poetry. Tell me, was it completely necessary to give all my poems zeros? It seems to me you might have been impressed. Nice try on this poem rockmage but I think you need to get laid buddy.
Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	pennymarie 4.246.249.247	4-Aug-05/11:21 AM
wow... ain't life full of saddness and then we hear their cries... that was awsome! loved it Penny
Re: Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222	Bethy 24.222.32.197	4-Aug-05/12:01 PM
good one :)
Re: Never born. by | Broken |	Bethy 24.222.32.197	4-Aug-05/12:08 PM
very deep... Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do... Good poem
Re: Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp	Bethy 24.222.32.221	4-Aug-05/1:47 PM
WOW!!! excellent ! Now you got me thinking... Ok...there is no beginning and there is no end :)
Re: Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	toward 65.222.80.242	4-Aug-05/1:53 PM
I like it - the subject matter hits home. Honest and sad without being weepy. I stumbled over one line: "If you only knew what my eyes think"... The rest was concrete, but that was kind of abstract. Thanks for sharing
Re: THINK ABOUT ME by prettyktm	Bethy 24.222.32.157	4-Aug-05/2:47 PM
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather... good poem...Bethy :)
Re: Sand by toward	Bethy 24.222.32.157	4-Aug-05/2:57 PM
sand is hard to walk in sometimes eh...but we all do it... Bethy :)
Re: The Edge is Better Blue by D. $ Fontera	Bethy 24.222.32.251	5-Aug-05/6:50 AM
there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
Re: Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher	Bethy 24.222.32.251	5-Aug-05/6:54 AM
I love this...so imaginative and creative...I think I peeeeeed myself... Bethy :)
Re: Mavis Beacon, Human. by Crann Mascher	Bethy 24.222.32.251	5-Aug-05/7:00 AM
Are you accepting any patients...sometimes I just need to spit it all out there...lol...boy do I need to get away...I got the single Mom syndrome blues...hmmm sounds like another poem for me...lol Excellent!! Bethy