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zodiac 86.108.11.87 |
3-Aug-05/5:27 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
zodiac 86.108.11.87 |
3-Aug-05/5:35 AM |
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I just heard careless whisper twice in a row on Jordanian radio and thought, I went to grad school for this.
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| Re: SO LONG MY BELOVED by prettyktm |
zodiac 86.108.11.87 |
3-Aug-05/5:38 AM |
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Hi, if you want to talk the language of love and peace, I'd say stop talking about "this isn't my war but I've gotta go cause a man's gotta do his duty and kill people who are just doing their duties and so on and so on". That's what lets wars happen. Personally, I'd pack up for Canada, see what they do when they don't have any more suckers to shoot out of their cannons.
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| Re: War by zodiac |
Niphredil 192.114.44.184 |
3-Aug-05/7:11 AM |
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Fascinating. But I admit I am confused; too many swirling motives here. Aside from the central bread theme, I'd be happy if you were to clarify
"the order of things: a dog, a made bed,
a centerpiece, those million, no, billion lives
saved for some use I can't imagine - to trip
my hands, maybe..."
Who are these billion lives? a country? a nation? just people? not even human? who saved them and why?
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| Re: War by zodiac |
Dovina 85.169.62.90 |
3-Aug-05/7:53 AM |
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Lives saved for some use which you can't understand and despise as useless. Why call her Girlie, as if she has only flippant wants?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 85.169.62.90 |
3-Aug-05/7:55 AM |
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| Re: War by zodiac |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/9:09 AM |
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Maybe a less general title could help wheel it all in? *7*
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| Re: Tangled web. by darby pyn |
Bethy 24.222.32.217 |
3-Aug-05/10:43 AM |
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Chilling yet very revealing...Bethy
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| Re: Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick |
Bethy 24.222.32.217 |
3-Aug-05/10:46 AM |
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Sounds like an escape from the reality of Divorce...been there... Bethy
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bethy 24.222.32.217 |
3-Aug-05/10:56 AM |
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| Re: Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/1:30 PM |
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| Re: Vain Moment by Bethy |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/1:31 PM |
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| Re: Floss by jauser |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/1:34 PM |
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"Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great" <~ Outsider art
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/1:45 PM |
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| Re: untitled by AaronJKeating |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
3-Aug-05/1:46 PM |
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| Re: Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
PoeticOne 24.43.122.90 |
3-Aug-05/1:48 PM |
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I like the flow of it, great wording too! Good Job!
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| Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp |
PoeticOne 24.43.122.90 |
3-Aug-05/1:50 PM |
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It was ok... but its different, as in unique!
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| Re: Vain Moment by Bethy |
PoeticOne 24.43.122.90 |
3-Aug-05/1:52 PM |
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I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!
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| Re: War by zodiac |
MacFrantic 207.200.116.65 |
3-Aug-05/2:57 PM |
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The title is strategically bland and I love the broken sentence structure. Always a fan of form. *10*
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| Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp |
Bethy 24.222.32.155 |
3-Aug-05/3:16 PM |
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Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
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