zodiac
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2005, 2:09 AM
Oh, are they shaming you guys at some obscure white-pantsed sport again?
In the language of prayer, all references to God are customarily capitalized, including "You." Eventhough is two words.
I got 1/3 through this and gave up due to errors in spelling and lack of proof reading.
Cute, but could be cuter.
Silly
Um this is amazing, thanks for the meme splurge
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quite amusing. Nicely put
I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
Everyone has whose problems? Don't you mean 'Everyone has his (or her) problems'? Or even better, 'Everyone has problems'?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
You're currently the best writer on the site. For what it's worth. An honest-to-goodness 10.
Best ode to Xanax that I have read in months!
Nice poem,
Sad story.
Krazy Combo :D
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What did u mean by xxscotishxxgrrlxx horus8 I still gots love?
Holding unfurled fags huh? Must be a San Fransisco thing. People will judge you here. Hence the site's name. For starters don't write a poem with 19 out of 32 lines that begin with the word I. I do sympathize with your feelings in the poem though.
How does Silly Putty make hilarious noises?
The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
I was love at first sight? a little narcissistic don't you think.