| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
8-Aug-05/12:12 PM |
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Best ode to Xanax that I have read in months!
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| Re: TV Date by the_poetess |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
8-Aug-05/12:17 PM |
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Um this is amazing, thanks for the meme splurge
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
8-Aug-05/12:25 PM |
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Poem successfully added to your 'favorites'
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| Re: Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
8-Aug-05/12:33 PM |
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quite amusing. Nicely put
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| Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
8-Aug-05/12:37 PM |
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Nice poem,
Sad story.
Krazy Combo :D
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| Re: Philosophy King by crooked_smile |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/1:55 PM |
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I got 1/3 through this and gave up due to errors in spelling and lack of proof reading.
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| Re: Prayer 2M by peahunky |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/1:58 PM |
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love = faith? Is that what you mean?
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| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/2:05 PM |
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In the language of prayer, all references to God are customarily capitalized, including "You." Eventhough is two words.
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/2:07 PM |
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Cute, but could be cuter.
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| Re: Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/2:09 PM |
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XOXScottishgrlXOX 64.12.116.135 |
8-Aug-05/8:30 PM |
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What did u mean by xxscotishxxgrrlxx horus8 I still gots love?
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:18 AM |
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You didn't REMEBER to put another M in remember.
By the way if you cut off your penis do you think the doctor would remember you?
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| Re: I Never Thought by TLRufener |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:31 AM |
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Holding unfurled fags huh? Must be a San Fransisco thing. People will judge you here. Hence the site's name. For starters don't write a poem with 19 out of 32 lines that begin with the word I. I do sympathize with your feelings in the poem though.
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| Re: Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:41 AM |
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How does Silly Putty make hilarious noises?
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| Re: BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/1:43 AM |
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The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
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| Re: That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:46 AM |
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I was love at first sight? a little narcissistic don't you think.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:09 AM |
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Oh, are they shaming you guys at some obscure white-pantsed sport again?
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| Re: That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:10 AM |
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I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
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| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:14 AM |
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Everyone has whose problems? Don't you mean 'Everyone has his (or her) problems'? Or even better, 'Everyone has problems'?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
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| Re: Waiting Room by jessicazee |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:16 AM |
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You're currently the best writer on the site. For what it's worth. An honest-to-goodness 10.
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