Re: The One by RGSsparky	Bethy 24.222.32.224	5-Aug-05/8:27 PM
very nice...sweet actually...Bethy:)
Re: Fairies by whispern_smoke_wisp	Bethy 24.222.32.224	5-Aug-05/8:35 PM
when I was a little girl, my grams said if you look very carefully you can see where the faries have hung out their laundry all over the lawn...and sure enough I did...of course now I tell my little girl the same...look in the morning where the dew hangs on little spider webs...it looks like canopys of laundry... Beautiful...thanks for bringing back an old memory :) :) Bethy
Re: Philosophy King by crooked_smile	Bethy 24.222.32.224	5-Aug-05/8:37 PM
I like this...many different meanings...for me...of course, I am deep anyway..lol
Re: Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher	Bethy 24.222.32.224	5-Aug-05/8:40 PM
I have read this poem 4 times...it sounds really neat...then you loose me...I think I might be thinking to much...you think... Sounds like your argeuing with yourself...Bethy:)
Re: A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher	zodiac 213.186.179.127	6-Aug-05/3:03 AM
Makes me wonder, why did you emphasize "move" in movies? Movies just means pictures that move.
Re: Never born. by | Broken |	zodiac 213.186.179.127	6-Aug-05/3:10 AM
Maybe you don't want to, but if you DID want to make this poem EVEN BETTER you might make the following edits: Breathe => breath, Planning about your perfect life => Planning your perfect life, dreamt => dreamed, it to => it would, .. => [nothing], long => longer, .. => [nothing], punctuation throughout. Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed seeing what it would be like to live pointlessly. -10-
Re: Sand by toward	zodiac 213.186.179.127	6-Aug-05/3:29 AM
...During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. IT WAS THEN THAT I CARRIED YOU!!!!1!!
Re: Writer's Block by shadows	zodiac 213.186.179.127	6-Aug-05/3:32 AM
Awkward. Ironic, huh? Congratulations on being the second poem titled "Writer's Block" on poemranker this week.
Re: War by zodiac	Bethy 24.222.32.240	6-Aug-05/4:52 AM
I knew it was about your wife...good wives like to keep alot of one or two things just incase there is a bread shortage...yeast being one of them lol...you made me look in my cupboards to see what I have ALOT of lol...looks like its jello and macaroni..I love this poem...
Re: Megan by RaVensEternalFire	Bethy 24.222.32.240	6-Aug-05/5:20 AM
I like your last few lines...good poem...Bethy :)
Re: forwards by nentwined	Bethy 24.222.32.240	6-Aug-05/5:22 AM
...so tightly curled and twisted...I like this line...I like this poem...Bethy:)
Re: Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	6-Aug-05/10:39 AM
This poems quite cool Ace. Now turn around so I can nibble on those buns.
Re: Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	6-Aug-05/10:42 AM
Sorry. Couldn't resist.
Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8	Bethy 24.222.32.211	6-Aug-05/3:17 PM
HAHAHAHAHA!!! i love it...its like trying to fart, when you have diarrhea...so complicated, yet so simple...*9*
Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8	Bethy 24.222.32.211	6-Aug-05/3:23 PM
OR...this is real and I am soooooooo OSI (out in space) that I need a direct shuttle too...what was I saying...lol Bethy:) its still a nine!
Re: Waiting Room by jessicazee	Bethy 24.222.32.208	7-Aug-05/5:48 AM
this is great!!! I love it... Bethy :)
Re: Prayer 2M by peahunky	Bethy 24.222.32.208	7-Aug-05/5:51 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 24.222.32.230	7-Aug-05/9:58 AM
I totally love this poem...excellent!!!
Re: Waiting Room by jessicazee	XOXScottishgrlXOX 205.188.116.139	7-Aug-05/5:34 PM
That's pretty good it just makes me really not want to go to the dentist!!!!
Re: Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	8-Aug-05/8:16 AM
Ha, funny character. Eeek, doritos and old spice