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zodiac on A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher 6 Aug 2005, 3:03 AM

Makes me wonder, why did you emphasize "move" in movies? Movies just means pictures that move.

zodiac on Never born. by | Broken | 6 Aug 2005, 3:10 AM

Maybe you don't want to, but if you DID want to make this poem EVEN BETTER you might make the following edits: Breathe => breath, Planning about your perfect life => Planning your perfect life, dreamt => dreamed, it to => it would, .. => [nothing], long => longer, .. => [nothing], punctuation throughout. Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed seeing what it would be like to live pointlessly. -10-

zodiac on Sand by toward 6 Aug 2005, 3:29 AM

...During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. IT WAS THEN THAT I CARRIED YOU!!!!1!!

zodiac on Writer's Block by shadows 6 Aug 2005, 3:32 AM

Awkward. Ironic, huh? Congratulations on being the second poem titled "Writer's Block" on poemranker this week.

Bethy on War by zodiac 6 Aug 2005, 4:52 AM

I knew it was about your wife...good wives like to keep alot of one or two things just incase there is a bread shortage...yeast being one of them lol...you made me look in my cupboards to see what I have ALOT of lol...looks like its jello and macaroni..I love this poem...

Bethy on Megan by RaVensEternalFire 6 Aug 2005, 5:20 AM

I like your last few lines...good poem...Bethy :)

Bethy on forwards by nentwined 6 Aug 2005, 5:22 AM

...so tightly curled and twisted...I like this line...I like this poem...Bethy:)

Bethy on The One by RGSsparky 5 Aug 2005, 8:27 PM

very nice...sweet actually...Bethy:)

Bethy on Fairies by whispern_smoke_wisp 5 Aug 2005, 8:35 PM

when I was a little girl, my grams said if you look very carefully you can see where the faries have hung out their laundry all over the lawn...and sure enough I did...of course now I tell my little girl the same...look in the morning where the dew hangs on little spider webs...it looks like canopys of laundry... Beautiful...thanks for bringing back an old memory :) :) Bethy

Bethy on Philosophy King by crooked_smile 5 Aug 2005, 8:37 PM

I like this...many different meanings...for me...of course, I am deep anyway..lol

Bethy on Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher 5 Aug 2005, 8:40 PM

I have read this poem 4 times...it sounds really neat...then you loose me...I think I might be thinking to much...you think... Sounds like your argeuing with yourself...Bethy:)

ALChemy on Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina 6 Aug 2005, 10:39 AM

This poems quite cool Ace. Now turn around so I can nibble on those buns.

Bethy on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 6 Aug 2005, 3:17 PM

HAHAHAHAHA!!! i love it...its like trying to fart, when you have diarrhea...so complicated, yet so simple...*9*

Bethy on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 6 Aug 2005, 3:23 PM

OR...this is real and I am soooooooo OSI (out in space) that I need a direct shuttle too...what was I saying...lol Bethy:) its still a nine!

Bethy on Waiting Room by jessicazee 7 Aug 2005, 5:48 AM

this is great!!! I love it... Bethy :)

Bethy on Prayer 2M by peahunky 7 Aug 2005, 5:51 AM

BEAUTIFUL!!!

XOXScottishgrlXOX on Waiting Room by jessicazee 7 Aug 2005, 5:34 PM

That's pretty good it just makes me really not want to go to the dentist!!!!

ALChemy on Beware of Cruel Poets by Dovina 6 Aug 2005, 10:42 AM

Sorry. Couldn't resist.

Bethy on some deleted poem 7 Aug 2005, 9:58 AM

I totally love this poem...excellent!!!

T. Jonathron Remp on Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy 8 Aug 2005, 8:16 AM

Ha, funny character. Eeek, doritos and old spice