Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:46 PM
A sad sentiment. It would be nice if the rhyming structure of the first verse could be continued in all verses, but it's better not to force it.
Re: Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:49 PM
I like this, but have trouble with the adverb following the noun in the title and in the theme.
Re: A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:56 PM
Makes a gal wonder, how many guygals do I see in the lady's room.
Re: Mavis Beacon, Human. by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/2:03 PM
I like this a lot. Is the long quote yours?
Re: Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/2:10 PM
Except for "boomed boomingly," flumpet, and the last line, an enjoyed and novel read.
Re: An A to Z of Tards by Johnnie Baptiste	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	5-Aug-05/2:38 PM
A is for An A to Z of Tards
Re: The Beatles by i_am_the_popsicle	Bethy 24.222.32.198	5-Aug-05/2:39 PM
We all live in a yellow submarine...I,ll see you there...people have become too lost in what is not available...Good poem... Bethy :)
Re: first poem of the new year by that_funny_girl	Bethy 24.222.32.198	5-Aug-05/3:10 PM
ummmmm you wrote this poem...thats a great start...
Re: Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/3:39 PM
Your last line describes most poems.
Re: I”d Kill Your Dog For Respect by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/3:46 PM
Funny!
Re: Mr. Unremarkable: Circumstance #1 by MacFrantic	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/3:49 PM
Mark Abel works out as expected, but the other Mark - who is he?
Re: TV Date by the_poetess	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/4:40 PM
Good except for some misspellings.
Re: Sorry by XOXScottishgrlXOX	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/4:42 PM
I think you are undecided on exactly what it is you want to say to him.
Re: first poem of the new year by that_funny_girl	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/4:45 PM
A "rambling reflection of thoughts" is how a poem can start.
Re: The Beatles by i_am_the_popsicle	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/4:50 PM
It's been 2600 years since Plato said it. What are we going to do?
Re: Never born. by | Broken |	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/4:59 PM
CS Lewis says that even the most ideal cirmstance falls short of providing satisfaction. The best marriage, the best friendship, they all fail to fulfill our wants. It is probable, therefore, he goes on, that only by looking to a force beyond the limitations of humanity can we find satisfaction.
Re: Writer's Block by shadows	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/5:01 PM
heap of words - yes.
Re: Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/5:27 PM
Dear Me, Your're insane! Love always, You
Re: science by whispern_smoke_wisp	whispern_smoke_wisp 152.163.100.135	5-Aug-05/6:08 PM
hae any of you ever hugged a dog?
Re: The One by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 81.135.219.214	5-Aug-05/6:50 PM
i love her to bits, she nearly accidentally blinded me tonight, but i still love her!