Dovina
on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy
5 Aug 2005, 1:46 PM
A sad sentiment. It would be nice if the rhyming structure of the first verse could be continued in all verses, but it's better not to force it.
I like this, but have trouble with the adverb following the noun in the title and in the theme.
Makes a gal wonder, how many guygals do I see in the lady's room.
A is for An A to Z of Tards
We all live in a yellow submarine...I,ll see you there...people have become too lost in what is not available...Good poem... Bethy :)
ummmmm you wrote this poem...thats a great start...
Your last line describes most poems.
Funny!
hae any of you ever hugged a dog?
I like this a lot. Is the long quote yours?
Except for "boomed boomingly," flumpet, and the last line, an enjoyed and novel read.
Mark Abel works out as expected, but the other Mark - who is he?
Good except for some misspellings.
I think you are undecided on exactly what it is you want to say to him.
A "rambling reflection of thoughts" is how a poem can start.
It's been 2600 years since Plato said it. What are we going to do?
CS Lewis says that even the most ideal cirmstance falls short of providing satisfaction. The best marriage, the best friendship, they all fail to fulfill our wants. It is probable, therefore, he goes on, that only by looking to a force beyond the limitations of humanity can we find satisfaction.
heap of words - yes.
Dear Me,
Your're insane!
Love always,
You