So we're all Jerry's kids?

Was Jerry your first boyfriend...if so...nice...am I on the right track...first thing it made me think of...my first ...crush guy, gave me a Gordie Howe hockey card... :) Bethy

your friggin genius !!! Bethy :) :) *10*

For that opening alone thanks for the piss stain trousers/

and Jerry, after Adam fell into the pit like blind

Is the right half written in Elvish? Clever!

I work with a real wolf-child. Or, rather, a boy who's lived in a sheep-pen since he was five years old - it's the same disorder, from a psychiatric perspective. He doesn't do any of the things your guy in the poem does. Mostly he just runs into walls alot and makes sounds like a motorboat. And steals teacakes, lots of teacakes.

"two" "dark" Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?

You've got potentisl for a good poem here, but the grammar is terrible.

A guess - Mr Springer Final thought - confuzled.

The opposite of love is not hate it's indifference. This can be said about faith too.

Retitle - 'Plug' I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.

at last, even a dying on the cross can be tiresome,not all the "love" life offers hangs our "hopes" on suicide"

Remeber: To meber again.

poetry in spirit, flesh and word

Then Juan came along and Adam and Jerry never heard from Eve again. In all seriousness though. Don't you think Genesis is a bit demeaning to women. Someone should rewrite it. It's not like it hasn't been done before.

Very Nice...Bethy :)

everybody lies...lol...even princesssssss...but your poem is sweet...good :) Bethy

hehehehehehe hahaah heh heh ya ya fun...:) Bethy

awww cool looc wwwa ...OK like my computer is limited to those wonderful little mark thingys...:) Bethy