| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:18 AM |
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Is the right half written in Elvish? Clever!
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zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:21 AM |
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I work with a real wolf-child. Or, rather, a boy who's lived in a sheep-pen since he was five years old - it's the same disorder, from a psychiatric perspective. He doesn't do any of the things your guy in the poem does. Mostly he just runs into walls alot and makes sounds like a motorboat. And steals teacakes, lots of teacakes.
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| Re: My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:52 AM |
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"two" "dark"
Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:56 AM |
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You've got potentisl for a good poem here, but the grammar is terrible.
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| Re: First by Dovina |
Caducus 172.214.52.232 |
9-Aug-05/8:03 AM |
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A guess - Mr Springer
Final thought - confuzled.
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 |
Caducus 172.214.52.232 |
9-Aug-05/8:04 AM |
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Retitle - 'Plug'
I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.
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Caducus 172.214.52.232 |
9-Aug-05/8:06 AM |
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For that opening alone thanks for the piss stain trousers/
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| Re: First by Dovina |
daggatolar 196.201.131.153 |
9-Aug-05/8:09 AM |
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and Jerry, after Adam
fell into the pit
like blind
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| Re: First by Dovina |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
9-Aug-05/8:10 AM |
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So we're all Jerry's kids?
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daggatolar 196.201.131.153 |
9-Aug-05/8:14 AM |
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at last, even a dying on the cross
can be tiresome,not all the "love" life offers hangs our "hopes" on suicide"
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
9-Aug-05/8:15 AM |
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
daggatolar 196.201.131.153 |
9-Aug-05/8:22 AM |
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poetry in spirit, flesh and word
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| Re: First by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/8:23 AM |
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Then Juan came along and Adam and Jerry never heard from Eve again.
In all seriousness though. Don't you think Genesis is a bit demeaning to women. Someone should rewrite it. It's not like it hasn't been done before.
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ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/8:41 AM |
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The opposite of love is not hate it's indifference. This can be said about faith too.
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| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:18 PM |
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| Re: My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:22 PM |
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everybody lies...lol...even princesssssss...but your poem is sweet...good :) Bethy
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| Re: Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:30 PM |
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your friggin genius !!! Bethy :) :) *10*
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| Re: First by Dovina |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:34 PM |
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Was Jerry your first boyfriend...if so...nice...am I on the right track...first thing it made me think of...my first ...crush guy, gave me a Gordie Howe hockey card... :) Bethy
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| Re: Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:37 PM |
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hehehehehehe hahaah heh heh ya ya fun...:) Bethy
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:41 PM |
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awww cool looc wwwa ...OK like my computer is limited to those wonderful little mark thingys...:) Bethy
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