:)

innocent, and sweet

beautiful words :)

simplistic and warm

Observant Nature. Classic execution. Nine.

we wear the same shoes sometimes :)

...Why is it I have this feeling that I've read something very close to this before?... -shrug-

The coffee, or love? Is that what you're refering to when asking "Is it poison, is it remedy?"

I have a better exit stategy.

You're much better at executing prose peices... I think you should consider writing short stories, in a prosey fashion. I say nine; but since this far outweighs all of your previous posts in my opinion, I'll bless you with a ten.

I think I have relatives on that floor...

I can hear what you have written, may I ask is this a slow song or fast? I feel that it is kind of a hard rock ballad, am I close?

Life is beautiful, this life is sad. A hug for the writer of the note. :)

very true...you are a natural when it comes to heart talk...you should come back and write more

Great, been there, usually ends like this. A good description

Bene mon ami.

You'd have a wonderful career with the Hallmark card company. If you intended originality and style, you failed. This is a replicated cliche, not a poem. I understand the sentiments intended, so I'll be nice and give this a three... 'cept we both know that a zero would be the blessing otherwise. I can feel myself starting to get weak, carrion birds need blood on their beaks.

Nice work. I'm sorry that there wasn't a good man there willing to give you that sexual healing- better luck next time. Blessed with eight.

um... no.

Much better.