Re: 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub	Bethy 165.154.46.180	2-Sep-08/9:16 AM
very good
Re: Hum by Nepanthe	Bethy 165.154.46.180	2-Sep-08/9:41 AM
excellent intro, middle and end...a full-bodied poem :)
Re: Are your eyes by hobojo	Bethy 165.154.46.180	2-Sep-08/9:47 AM
I can hear what you have written, may I ask is this a slow song or fast? I feel that it is kind of a hard rock ballad, am I close?
Re: Suicide Note(Broken Down) by alvinb	Bethy 165.154.46.180	2-Sep-08/9:51 AM
Life is beautiful, this life is sad. A hug for the writer of the note. :)
Re: Billy Collins by INTRANSIT	Bethy 165.154.46.180	2-Sep-08/10:02 AM
:)
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 165.154.46.70	4-Sep-08/6:23 AM
I think I have relatives on that floor...
Re: The KINGS by winniss	Bethy 165.154.46.70	4-Sep-08/6:25 AM
innocent, and sweet
Re: under the weather by 7!3	Bethy 165.154.46.18	4-Sep-08/9:11 AM
we wear the same shoes sometimes :)
Re: Believe by 7!3	Bethy 165.154.46.18	4-Sep-08/9:13 AM
beautiful words :)
Re: talkstupid by 7!3	Bethy 165.154.46.18	4-Sep-08/9:15 AM
very true...you are a natural when it comes to heart talk...you should come back and write more
Re: plugs by 7!3	Bethy 165.154.46.18	4-Sep-08/9:17 AM
simplistic and warm
Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy	Dovina 68.183.245.166	4-Sep-08/10:08 AM
Great, been there, usually ends like this. A good description
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/5:59 PM
Bene mon ami.
Re: The KINGS by winniss	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:02 PM
You'd have a wonderful career with the Hallmark card company. If you intended originality and style, you failed. This is a replicated cliche, not a poem. I understand the sentiments intended, so I'll be nice and give this a three... 'cept we both know that a zero would be the blessing otherwise. I can feel myself starting to get weak, carrion birds need blood on their beaks.
Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:05 PM
Nice work. I'm sorry that there wasn't a good man there willing to give you that sexual healing- better luck next time. Blessed with eight.
Re: :: a stroll by elementalidad	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:06 PM
um... no.
Re: :: wandering by elementalidad	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:07 PM
Much better.
Re: :: snowsounds by elementalidad	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:08 PM
...Why is it I have this feeling that I've read something very close to this before?... -shrug-
Re: :: chameleon by elementalidad	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:08 PM
Observant Nature. Classic execution. Nine.
Re: Coffee or Love by Nepanthe	SupremeDreamer 64.9.233.156	5-Sep-08/6:13 PM
The coffee, or love? Is that what you're refering to when asking "Is it poison, is it remedy?"