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Believe (Free verse) by 7!3
a day ran by
but i'm still waiting
for the call
that call
will say you are okay
another evening, wondering
it's the night that gets the worst.
because it's cold and lonely.
and though you like the beautiful rain weather,
i'm afraid that no one will be
by your side.
in my thoughts
i paint you a future
so that you will remain fighting
and strong like an oak tree
in the middle
of the junk of the forest.
so when you return
you will be able to try again.
and when you do stand up
you will be able to fly again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7975
Posted: May 31, 2006 9:30 PM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2006 9:30 PM PDT
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