talkstupid

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Apr 2006 · Edited 18 Apr 2006 · 3 comments

whycan't you admitit. thatyou fallinlove too easily. peopl don'twant tohear you. hearyou talkstupid. peopl don'treally care. they don't wantyou. likeyou. wantthem. whycan't you stopit. stopbeing sobig. learntobe free. open yourmind' letyour feelingsgo you don'treally needthem. likethey. needyou.

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[9] digipoet 18-Apr-06/12:16 AM Reply

lol! nicely done

[8] Ranger 18-Apr-06/12:33 AM Reply

Interesting idea. Well worked, although Dark Angel did it more concisely in haiku form. I like the asymmetrical mirroring of the last stanza with the end of the first.

Let'snot
Giveintothat boringcliche
Knownas
Emo

[8] Bethy 4-Sep-08/9:15 AM Reply

very true...you are a natural when it comes to heart talk...you should come back and write more