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talkstupid (Free verse) by 7!3 whycan't you admitit.
thatyou fallinlove too easily.
peopl don'twant tohear you.
hearyou talkstupid.
peopl don'treally care.
they don't wantyou.
likeyou.
wantthem.
whycan't you stopit.
stopbeing sobig.
learntobe free.
open yourmind'
letyour feelingsgo
you don'treally needthem.
likethey.
needyou.
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Posted: April 18, 2006 12:10 AM PDT; Last modified: April 18, 2006 12:15 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5270 Comments:
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digipoet @ 68.117.39.63
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18-Apr-06/12:16 AM
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lol! nicely done
Interesting idea. Well worked, although Dark Angel did it more concisely in haiku form. I like the asymmetrical mirroring of the last stanza with the end of the first.
Let'snot Giveintothat boringcliche Knownas Emo
very true...you are a natural when it comes to heart talk...you should come back and write more
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