Poemranker [Poem: [Gasp]{last letter, first letter}] [by sca] Thu Nov 21 12:05:00 PST 2024

Youâll leave each hour reminiscing grasps, soft touches searching gentle ecstasy, yearning guesses stretched down necking gasps, sought to over rule expert tendencies sinking guns sent to osculate, entertaining grown nerveâs spondaic capacities. Summerâs skins scratch heat to open nerves, seen now with honesty, your rough hands spark kisses, shudders sent to opal loversâ spontaneities, stiff fingers shiver reserving guises; successes sighs sent through humble eccentricities .

[7] Ranger @ 81.103.124.179 | 4-Jun-07/4:31 AM | Reply

Ah, some most superb multisyllabic rhymes. You must like Byron.

[n/a] sca @ 124.191.64.6 > Ranger | 6-Jun-07/2:00 AM | Reply

To be honest, I've read very little, and have very little understanding, of any poetry I haven't just happened across on the internet.

I like writing literature in all forms, how-ever read mainly books.

But back on track, I have liked Byron whence I've read his works.

[n/a] richa @ 85.210.32.212 | 16-Jun-07/1:49 PM | Reply

There isn't a whole lot of point in having the end letter of a line and the letter at the beginning of the next line the same. I understand it was an allpoetry challenge. It was a stupid one. It works for the s's sonically but y at the end of a word has a different sound to a y used at the beginning of a word. When you do these challenges things seem kind of forced also.