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[Gasp]{last letter, first letter} (Other) by sca

You’ll leave each hour reminiscing grasps, soft touches searching gentle ecstasy, yearning guesses stretched down necking gasps, sought to over rule expert tendencies sinking guns sent to osculate, entertaining grown nerve’s spondaic capacities. Summer’s skins scratch heat to open nerves, seen now with honesty, your rough hands spark kisses, shudders sent to opal lovers’ spontaneities, stiff fingers shiver reserving guises; successes sighs sent through humble eccentricities .

richa 16-Jun-07/1:49 PM
There isn't a whole lot of point in having the end letter of a line and the letter at the beginning of the next line the same. I understand it was an allpoetry challenge. It was a stupid one. It works for the s's sonically but y at the end of a word has a different sound to a y used at the beginning of a word. When you do these challenges things seem kind of forced also.




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