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talkstupid (Free verse) by 7!3

whycan't you admitit. thatyou fallinlove too easily. peopl don'twant tohear you. hearyou talkstupid. peopl don'treally care. they don't wantyou. likeyou. wantthem. whycan't you stopit. stopbeing sobig. learntobe free. open yourmind' letyour feelingsgo you don'treally needthem. likethey. needyou.

Ranger 18-Apr-06/12:33 AM
Interesting idea. Well worked, although Dark Angel did it more concisely in haiku form. I like the asymmetrical mirroring of the last stanza with the end of the first.

Let'snot
Giveintothat boringcliche
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