| Re: The Scout by wilco |
Bethy 24.222.32.194 |
5-Sep-05/5:27 AM |
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The title doesn't appeal to me, I do like how you used wolves with regards to the hurricane...:) Bethy
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| Re: First Love by Dovina |
Bethy 24.222.32.194 |
5-Sep-05/5:34 AM |
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I am surely not "winter-broken" either...lol...here in Canada, we have winter and winnnnnter...lol...:) Bethy
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| Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
7!3 219.95.8.62 |
5-Sep-05/5:39 AM |
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| Re: Baudelaire: The Albatross by Sasha |
zodiac 213.186.186.1 |
5-Sep-05/5:54 AM |
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The first line-and-a-half is the best opening I've read recently.
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| Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/7:19 AM |
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i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/7:25 AM |
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that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
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| Re: this dude is the best by ay deee |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/7:46 AM |
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thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
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| Re: self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/7:54 AM |
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monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: 575 by nentwined |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/7:59 AM |
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| Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
5-Sep-05/8:03 AM |
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many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/2:32 PM |
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| Re: this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/2:38 PM |
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judgment calls are really hard to make :) Bethy
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| Re: Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/2:42 PM |
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each mind on its own patio...good line...:) Bethy
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/2:54 PM |
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small changes but it still is a good poem...:) Bethy
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/3:27 PM |
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go forward and be born again...theres a real painful place in your words...if this is about love-lost...then move on...nobody is worth waiting for, if your the one waiting...:) Bethy
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| Re: Letting Go by longships |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/3:34 PM |
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Good-bye is the hardest word to say...I remember how I felt when I saw couples in love...I wrote a poem about it...its a little nasty...but...love is great...it will find you :) Bethy
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| Re: Watch where you're swingin' your dipthong, buddy by INTRANSIT |
Bethy 24.222.32.197 |
5-Sep-05/4:04 PM |
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hehehe hahahaahahha he haha...LMAO this is sooooo funny...I needed this...:) Bethy *10* -Fav
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
Bethy 24.222.32.176 |
5-Sep-05/6:13 PM |
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very beautiful...it paints a nice picture...*8* :) Bethy
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| Re: The Blood Of Life by eros |
Heather Dee 63.17.24.26 |
6-Sep-05/2:27 AM |
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Wow quite shakesperean or something along those lines a little much if you ask me
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| Re: Pathological by Miggy |
Heather Dee 63.17.24.26 |
6-Sep-05/2:31 AM |
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This is absolutley beautiful!!!!!
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.
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