Bethy
on Stardust by TLRufener
5 Sep 2005, 6:13 PM
very beautiful...it paints a nice picture...*8* :) Bethy
I am surely not "winter-broken" either...lol...here in Canada, we have winter and winnnnnter...lol...:) Bethy
lovely...
The first line-and-a-half is the best opening I've read recently.
i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
very nice...:) Bethy
judgment calls are really hard to make :) Bethy
each mind on its own patio...good line...:) Bethy
small changes but it still is a good poem...:) Bethy
thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
go forward and be born again...theres a real painful place in your words...if this is about love-lost...then move on...nobody is worth waiting for, if your the one waiting...:) Bethy
Good-bye is the hardest word to say...I remember how I felt when I saw couples in love...I wrote a poem about it...its a little nasty...but...love is great...it will find you :) Bethy
hehehe hahahaahahha he haha...LMAO this is sooooo funny...I needed this...:) Bethy *10* -Fav
Wow quite shakesperean or something along those lines a little much if you ask me
This is absolutley beautiful!!!!!
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.